tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post416259095937468310..comments2023-12-11T08:16:17.308-06:00Comments on Bankerchick's Scratchings: Restless-Trifextrakatie eggemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-79774176296914001732013-03-03T22:27:25.332-06:002013-03-03T22:27:25.332-06:00That first stanza is lovely in itself, and then it...That first stanza is lovely in itself, and then it sets up the punchline so well. Fun little piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-9398608935904136372013-03-03T09:13:20.231-06:002013-03-03T09:13:20.231-06:00It's a pity we can't take it in turns to b...It's a pity we can't take it in turns to be poorly - to get at least a little cosseting!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-51370173301138107772013-03-03T00:16:44.098-06:002013-03-03T00:16:44.098-06:00I never know if it's better to be sick on your...I never know if it's better to be sick on your own or to hobble through with someone else. Ack!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-6207538260482155512013-03-02T21:14:45.518-06:002013-03-02T21:14:45.518-06:00Very well done.. for 33 words :)Very well done.. for 33 words :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-40254502133434825272013-03-02T13:22:12.053-06:002013-03-02T13:22:12.053-06:00An O Henry tale told short and swift. Nice little ...An O Henry tale told short and swift. Nice little surprise. When I look at your blog caricature, I wonder. Are you really little with a big head?Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-36919578984702352272013-03-02T12:46:49.386-06:002013-03-02T12:46:49.386-06:00My poor wife always encourages me to "Fight i...My poor wife always encourages me to "Fight it! Fight it! Don't give in to it!" whenever she sees the signs of "Man Cold" coming on. Can't say that I blame her. :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-91723433969823212302013-03-02T12:46:07.095-06:002013-03-02T12:46:07.095-06:00I wanted to laugh, but maybe the scene you painted... I wanted to laugh, but maybe the scene you painted is a little too realistic. I wouldn't want to poke fun if you are miserable!<br /><br />Great work!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-54202124448961117392013-03-02T12:38:18.792-06:002013-03-02T12:38:18.792-06:00Love it! And have you ever done a good job of capt...Love it! And have you ever done a good job of capturing the misery of being sick!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10380277216952785078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-35295421042492228512013-03-02T12:27:29.096-06:002013-03-02T12:27:29.096-06:00Very nice site by the way friendly and well laid o...Very nice site by the way friendly and well laid out.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-82832999440104446752013-03-02T12:25:41.824-06:002013-03-02T12:25:41.824-06:00Great stanza!Great stanza!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-57011786104952978782013-03-02T12:25:39.423-06:002013-03-02T12:25:39.423-06:00Great stanza!Great stanza!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-91057931709651807922013-03-02T10:10:10.501-06:002013-03-02T10:10:10.501-06:00haha, that was cute. if not for the images, i woul...haha, that was cute. if not for the images, i would have thought those 33 words were leading to another tale. well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-50718915389674881082013-03-02T08:45:33.532-06:002013-03-02T08:45:33.532-06:00None of that stuff in my house this season-knock o...None of that stuff in my house this season-knock on wood! Ouch! Enjoyed it! Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-75608007082011432692013-03-02T07:50:19.396-06:002013-03-02T07:50:19.396-06:00This is lovely. Sweet and funny. Nicely done!
Whe...This is lovely. Sweet and funny. Nicely done!<br /><br />When I used to play Trifecta all the time, I had the actual judges TELL me it would have improved my piece to include an illustration. Now someone disses you for doing just that. Kinda reminded why I don't do it so much anymore.The Gal Herselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566779726191649848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-86484674244052189382013-03-02T07:43:55.433-06:002013-03-02T07:43:55.433-06:00Great twist. Love the build up. Great twist. Love the build up. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-61072821929390602822013-03-02T07:35:12.590-06:002013-03-02T07:35:12.590-06:00lol eeeeeww I thought it was something much worse ...lol eeeeeww I thought it was something much worse (: Though a cold is pretty bad...Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-21602354555269486392013-03-02T07:26:06.263-06:002013-03-02T07:26:06.263-06:00Great work.
Isn't using pictures cheating tho...Great work.<br /><br />Isn't using pictures cheating though? The story is so much more in my mind with the addition of that first pic.<br /><br />Great story none the lessAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-61806065799466558602013-03-02T06:28:52.102-06:002013-03-02T06:28:52.102-06:00Totally twisted my mind with the first pic - think...Totally twisted my mind with the first pic - thinking of illness, imminent disaster, then realised what you meant by the 2nd pic...very funny and clever.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10020430647050532416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-58926416846941421382013-03-02T02:25:52.146-06:002013-03-02T02:25:52.146-06:00Lovely image! I nice picture painted with words!Lovely image! I nice picture painted with words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-37850227976684755952013-03-01T17:53:11.651-06:002013-03-01T17:53:11.651-06:00I hate when that happens!I hate when that happens!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-43011075430307157842013-03-01T13:22:17.048-06:002013-03-01T13:22:17.048-06:00Ah the flu I guess?Ah the flu I guess?Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-19585859724962157592013-03-01T13:13:04.247-06:002013-03-01T13:13:04.247-06:00How sweet of you to share;)
This was a great litt...How sweet of you to share;)<br /><br />This was a great little piece!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-30870341052728981812013-03-01T13:09:49.173-06:002013-03-01T13:09:49.173-06:00Ha! I like this...Ha! I like this...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-90592093322761043642013-03-01T12:40:04.547-06:002013-03-01T12:40:04.547-06:00added lines .. DANG! Now I have to take care of HI...added lines .. DANG! Now I have to take care of HIM, too?!<br /><br />:) well done.PurpleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05593657030942243283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1880412498278791532.post-30888911929568871812013-03-01T12:14:17.133-06:002013-03-01T12:14:17.133-06:00With the influence of the first picture this took ...With the influence of the first picture this took on a tragic consumption bent, but with the second picture it took on a flu bent, where it became funny rather than tragic. Interesting!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com