July 1st, 2010 by Ed Grabianowski Robot Viking |
Ariadne lived a marvelous life before these awful times. Growing up she rarely saw the old man. Her life revolved around Mama and Papa’s rooms, courtyard and a tiny bewitching copse of trees surrounding a grassy hillock. Here, she played happily.
Mama was beautiful and vibrant. Ariadne was often by her side as she spoke of mystery and magic. Papa was elegant, but somewhat distant. He was often away, as he attended to Grandfather’s business. She had a blissful and limitless childhood, protected from the intrigues of grandfather’s ducal estate.
As Ariadne entered adolescence, Mama often became ill. More and more of her nurturing and education, left in the hands of her attendant Tilde. When she felt well, Mama still encouraged her imagination and cleverness. However, those days became rare as her health deteriorated.
Her mother died when Ariadne was
fourteen, followed closely by her father’s brutal murder, attacked on the road,
returning from a mission. Ariadne tried not to dwell on the despair she felt when
Grandfather sealed up the door to her happy home, moving her into other rooms
near his chamber. Now she sat on that same enchanted hillock
of her childhood, looking over the herbs she collected today.
“Lady Ariadne, we must return to the
castle before the duke asks for you,” whispered Tilde.
Ariadne answered her impatiently, “Tilde,
the guard is by the trees and we are well protected by the spring. This is fine
mucgwyrt, hand me the bag.” She tossed the root into the bag, inhaling its
earthy fragrance. She will concoct an empowerment
spell and elixir, tonight.
“My lady we must hurry, the guard!”
“Yes. Guard, we’re ready to return,” smiles Ariadne,
bringing a sweet posy of violets to her nose. “Grandfather, mustn’t worry.”
This is a continuation of Ariadne's Story from last week.
Definition of Dwell
a : to keep the attention directed —used with on or upondwell on my fears;
b : to speak or write insistently —used with on or upondwell ing on the recent
scandal
Definition of Dwell
a : to keep the attention directed —used with on or upon
b : to speak or write insistently —used with on or upon
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Ah, so that's what happened to her parents.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing! You certainly addressed smell. Earthy fragrance, sweet posy of violets, and even mentioning herbs brings about a certain essence of smell.
ReplyDeleteAlso, saw that your grandsons were born in February. How funny! For my parents, they have a set of twins born in January, two separate grandsons born in February, and then a grand daughter way out in September. She's the odd one out! February seems like a good month for grandchildren.
Shannon at The Warrior Muse
I like the way this tale is progressing-I sure hope she hones her magical skills & finds out who murdered her father & takes revenge-maybe her mother was poisoned too?Ah,am letting my imagination run amok,lol!Waiting for the next part
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Love where you're going with this. Well done!
ReplyDeletehmmmm the other parent died shortly after the other... fishy. i smell suspense! ^^ can't wait to see what our heroine's up to ^^
ReplyDeleteI can't remember reading the first part. Tried going back to find it but without any luck. It's a fine piece of writing so I'm glad I didn't miss it.
ReplyDeleteSounds like there's some suspicious stuff going on in the background here; I'm looking forward to seeing if it comes to light!
ReplyDeleteSandra
ReplyDeleteI haven't see you write this genre before. This was great! Definitely want to hear more.
I'm thinking that if her grandfather knows what's good for him he best start worrying. A lot.
ReplyDeleteI really like this series. I can't wait to see what she does.
ReplyDeleteI've enjoyed these past couple of posts about Ariadne - intriguing.
ReplyDeleteI want to know what the empowerment elixir will do. Hope to find out next time :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so very well written.
ReplyDeleteI like this little world your building. (: I hope it continues.
ReplyDeleteThis is shaping up to be quite a mystery. Was her mother murdered too? Inquiring minds want to read the next installment!
ReplyDeleteThis is a terrific story!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this continuation of Ariadne. She's feisty. And the concoction of the elixir is intriguing. What does she have in mind? I look forward to the next installment!
ReplyDeleteSuch well-rendered nostalgia. Love the word mucgwyrt!
ReplyDeleteIntrigue and magic in equal parts. And great use of the prompt!
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