Friday, February 15, 2013

No Embellishment Here-Trifextra


For this weekend's challenge, Trifextra is asking us to include some hyperbole in our piece. It doesn't have to be the whole piece, but it needs to be in there, and we're looking for 33 words, as usual. Here is mine.

We are apart;
I feel a hole in my heart, only they can fill.
Then I see them again,
 
   Only the most beautiful children in the Universe?

This is a Grandma’s humble opinion.
 
 

16 comments :

  1. They are always the most beautiful children in the Universe. Nice sentiment!

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  2. Grandchildren have no equal, anywhere!

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  3. Good one... so easy for grandparents to display hyperbole, isn't it?

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  4. Of course, they are most most beautiful children in the Universe. But then, I'm not a grandpa yet, so I might have to change my opinion later.

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  5. awe..A grandparents love is the best!

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  6. The best of both worlds. Grandparenting. I don't know first hand but it's what my parents always said.

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  7. I am busting to be a Nanna - this was perfect.

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  8. This really touched me. Nicely done.

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  9. GRANDPARENTS = HYPERBOLE. NUFF SAID!

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  10. Muy precious babies! Perfect response to the prompt.

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  11. Aww,such a sweet entry-loved it:-)

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