Friday, March 15, 2013

Moments-Trifextra



Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND
 
One moment, empty space,

The next, occupied by astonished souls.

Essences, wandering imprecisely,

Concerned By the business of being.  

Now, playing a strange game of mirrors.

Aware, only of time and space anew.
 
This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 words inspired by the following photo. Please remember that if you use the photo on your own blog, you must give proper credit (with clickable links).
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22 comments :

  1. UnknownMarch 15, 2013 at 11:04 AM

    The words "wandering imprecisely" will haunt me for sometime. Thank you.

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  2. AtreyeeMarch 15, 2013 at 11:17 AM

    The next, occupied by astonished souls.

    Essences, wandering imprecisely..

    What beautifully soul stirring imagery!Loved it:-)

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  3. DraugMarch 15, 2013 at 11:49 AM

    Ooo this is a little haunting. I love it.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 15, 2013 at 12:10 PM

    Purgatory?

    I loved the confused, haziness.

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  5. christinaMarch 15, 2013 at 12:22 PM

    oh i REALLY like this. i felt kind of panicky reading this. awesome for 33 words!!

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  6. loverofwordsMarch 15, 2013 at 2:00 PM

    Very evocative -- so glad to find another "seasoned citizen" -- as you mentioned on Tina's blog.

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  7. TMWHickmanMarch 15, 2013 at 4:11 PM

    Mirrors seem to lend themselves to games, don't they?

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  8. AnonymousMarch 15, 2013 at 6:32 PM

    The possibilities.... Nice interpretation.

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  9. Valerie BoersmaMarch 15, 2013 at 7:15 PM

    I love the line "Concerned by the business of being." It says so much! This was a really deep and thought provoking piece-well done!

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  10. GinaMarch 15, 2013 at 10:34 PM

    Smoke and mirrors. A mysterious game, for sure!

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  11. PurpleMooseMarch 15, 2013 at 11:34 PM

    this is haunting

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  12. ReneeMarch 16, 2013 at 7:43 AM

    I like this! There is a dream-like tone that just draws me in. Nicely written.

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  13. Sandra CrookMarch 16, 2013 at 11:42 AM

    Very well written, I enjoyed this.

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  14. The Magic of Ordinary DaysMarch 16, 2013 at 1:15 PM

    Beautiful. I love the obscurity of it.

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  15. kymmMarch 16, 2013 at 7:39 PM

    Great poem.
    Love wandering imprecisely!

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  16. Ann BennettMarch 16, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    You certainly captured the other worldly quality of the photo. Nice read.

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  17. AnonymousMarch 17, 2013 at 1:49 AM

    Just lovely...

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  18. AnonymousMarch 17, 2013 at 10:17 AM

    Exactly how I feel sometimes.

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  19. brudbergMarch 17, 2013 at 2:02 PM

    Eerie matching the picture

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  22. AnonymousMarch 18, 2013 at 4:34 AM

    I love the overall theme, light and free.

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