Friday, March 15, 2013

Moments-Trifextra



Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND
 
One moment, empty space,

The next, occupied by astonished souls.

Essences, wandering imprecisely,

Concerned By the business of being.  

Now, playing a strange game of mirrors.

Aware, only of time and space anew.
 
This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 words inspired by the following photo. Please remember that if you use the photo on your own blog, you must give proper credit (with clickable links).

22 comments :

  1. The words "wandering imprecisely" will haunt me for sometime. Thank you.

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  2. The next, occupied by astonished souls.

    Essences, wandering imprecisely..

    What beautifully soul stirring imagery!Loved it:-)

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  3. Ooo this is a little haunting. I love it.

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  4. Purgatory?

    I loved the confused, haziness.

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  5. oh i REALLY like this. i felt kind of panicky reading this. awesome for 33 words!!

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  6. Very evocative -- so glad to find another "seasoned citizen" -- as you mentioned on Tina's blog.

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  7. Mirrors seem to lend themselves to games, don't they?

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  8. The possibilities.... Nice interpretation.

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  9. I love the line "Concerned by the business of being." It says so much! This was a really deep and thought provoking piece-well done!

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  10. Smoke and mirrors. A mysterious game, for sure!

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  11. I like this! There is a dream-like tone that just draws me in. Nicely written.

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  12. Very well written, I enjoyed this.

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  13. Great poem.
    Love wandering imprecisely!

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  14. You certainly captured the other worldly quality of the photo. Nice read.

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  17. I love the overall theme, light and free.

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