Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Thorns-WOE & Trifecta

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Softly, slowly, she turns her face

Toward the sun

Dew glistening in her eyes

Her color glowing

As if blushing,

Belies

The scented honey of her words.


Softly, slowly, she turns her face

 Towards me

 Duplicity gleaming in her eyes

 Her pirate smile shines

Warning danger,

Confirms

 The thorns of her embrace.
 
WOE offers us a quotation and a song to Merge.
        The quotation is from Wuthering Heights by Emily Brontë:

“It was not the thorn bending to the honeysuckles, but the honeysuckles embracing the thorn.”

The song is Elton John's Tiny Dancer

18 comments :

  1. Oh very nice. Especially this:

    Her pirate smile shines

    Warning danger,

    Confirms

    The thorns of her embrace.

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  2. Wonderful interpretation of the prompts. I like - belies the scented honey of her words. Very nice.

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  3. You've got an artful way with words - I really enjoyed this.

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  4. This is splendid. I love how it flows (:

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  5. Beautifully done! This twists sinuously, like a snake charmer!

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  6. 'Belies

    The scented honey of her words.'

    That is brilliant. Well, it all is but those words especially.

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  7. Great meter in this poem. You've described an alluring and deceptive person so well!

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  8. Oh Katie, I love that pirate smile of hers! Gorgeously written!!

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  9. Very nice! Love the pirate's smile and the thorns of her embrace.

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  10. Very moving words! I had to read it a few times to enjoy it all more.

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  11. I liked how you repeated "Softly, slowly she turns her face.." It was a perfect line for the two-faced nature of this character. Well done and I had fun reading it out loud:~)

    Sara, A Sharing Connection

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  12. Katie,this is awesome!Loved the sensuous menace hidden underneath & her soft,slow movements which masks her ulterior motives!

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  13. Lovely job of working in the song. I love that song.

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  14. Ah the gleam of duplicity together with a pirate's smile. You just know you're gonna go there.

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  15. I love the rose analogy here, very nice. These words are woven beautifully.

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  16. With that picture, I knew she was going to have to be bad. Nice poetry.

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  17. Nicely done. I love the way you wove lyrics from the song into your piece. *Stopping by from Write on Edge*

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